- Good equalanium at the opening of the trailer
- Train station fast paced and interesting
- Completely slows after the train station, slow shots, the trailer drags on to much
- Slow pointless shots of the piper walking around the park
- Narrative not clear at all
- Whys is she sat on a swing?
- No pied piper concept
- The shots are too dark shots round in the park
- Need to make the narrative absolutely clear
Monday, 25 November 2013
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